English 131 is designed to help students become more thoughtful readers and effective writers, so that they may participate effectively in multiple academic situations.  

Here's the zip file with my comments on Majpap2.  Those who said they were not revising this for their portfolio got a "basic review" with overall comments.  Others are in "extended review" with more extensive comments. 

Please look in this Outlines zip file for my general notes, as well as looking at comments made on your outline.  * Don't forget to E-submit a full draft of Majpap2 by midnight on Tues, 2/28.

We'll be analyzing these sample cover letters in class for strengths/weaknesses.

OK, here's the Zip file with Majpap1dr2 (and my comments)

And here are the Alternative Readings w/ my comments

Epost: http://catalyst.washington.edu/webtools/epost/register.cgi?owner=shapis&id=13893

 E-submit: https://catalyst.washington.edu/webtools/secure/esubmit/turnin.cgi?owner=shapis&id=3824_