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 English 105 - Spring 2007 
Instructor: Shawna Shapiro  
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INFO AND  RESOURCES
General  Writing- info &  ideas
 Style, Word Choice, and Revision
 Grammar, Mechanics, and Editing

And my favorite link?  GOOGLE!!  Here are tips on how best to use it to find the info and resources you need.
REVISION TIPS:
Stake 'tips':
(questions to consider)
  • Why is my argument 'interesting' or 'unusual'?

  • Who (besides me) might care about what I'm saying, and Why?

  • Where is the 'twist' or irony (contradiction) here?
Revision Strategies for Portfolio A:
  • Consider each point in the Course Outcomes and commentary as a point for revision (see link above)
  • Read your paper aloud (or ask someone else to do it)
  • Ask your reader to summarize your paper (and see if that matches your intention)
  • Make a detailed outline and 'code' what's in your paper to make it match your outline.  This increases coherence.
  • Summarize each paragraph; if you can't do this, it might mean that cohesion is lacking.
  • Visit writing centers (see links above)
  • Remember: Shawna will review drafts before the official submision 'deadline.' 
    Send questions/focal points for her review, and give 24 hours for response.

EDITING TIPS:
Words to WATCH OUT for: 
  • pronouns (I, you, it)
  • vague language (there is/are,  something/someone/anybody,  people, things)
Common Errors: 
  • verb tense (be consistent!)
  • incomplete sentences (read entire paper aloud to make sure it says what you intended!)
  • citation lacking (both ideas/facts/statistics AND actual quotes need to be referenced)





RECENT ASSIGNMENTS:
[For assignments from previous weeks,  click here.]


 Monday, 5/21: Take notes on introductions from classmates' papers for discussion tomorrow.
Tuesday, 5/22 through Monday, 5/28:  See handout from Monday's class.  Don't forget that class is cancelled until Tuesday 5/29, during which Tae-youn will facilitate a peer review workshop on LP2 dr 2 (bring paper copy to class)

UPCOMING DUE DATES:
  • Portfolio B and cover letter to outside audiences due Monday June 4th at 5pm  (online, via Esubmit)

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